ddavid 149 Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Now then, even us 'oldies' have got to learn - so here's a first attempt at real editing: Have you any suggestions, please? (Constructive ones! - Ed) Thanks...... Cheers - Dai. :mrhappy: p.s. Sorry about the VA advert (again) Joe! Link to post Share on other sites
allardjd 1,853 Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Dai, No suggestions, but I like the three-holer. John Link to post Share on other sites
1mag1n3 0 Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Great for a first attempt i have to say! 3 things though... 1] The engine thrust should not affect the plane itself, just the background. 2] Possibly blur the background, to add more focus onto the plane itself. 3] Crop the grass close to the camera out, or most of it, so it loses the flat look. Maybe even add some grass from a photo... Although for a first attempt, as i said above its superb... Much better than mine! :mrhappy: Link to post Share on other sites
hurricanemk1c 195 Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Great Dai! Kieran Link to post Share on other sites
mutley 4,497 Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Hello Dai :mrhappy: respect that you are even trying this, a great first edit. May as Chris says you could have edited in some grass from a picture of airliners.net or the like. Cheers Link to post Share on other sites
reef 3 Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 To be honest Dai, i think you picked a hard shot for your first edit. While interesting in the rotate, being such a close shot cuts out most of your surroundings. You are also on the dark side of the aircaft leaving a very flat in the shade look which again is hard to edit. Like it has been said, heat usually distorts things viewed further from the heat although afterburners sometimes can distort the aircraft also. Airliners.net is a great source of what an aircraft should look like and simply work as much as you can into a shot. Its great to see you give editing a try and hope to see more. Nice work Dai and if you or anyone ever needs any advice i'd be more than happy to help if i can, just drop me a PM. steve Link to post Share on other sites
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